Sunday, April 29, 2012

The Toy Store


“458 Rockabye Lane.” Jerry glanced down at the small card in his hand.  He was in the right place.  Strange looking building. 
He pushed on the door, which opened to reveal a huge room, three stories tall, with rows of boxes and packages, buckets, and barrels.  Several tall golden pillars stretched up to the ceiling.  The floor and walls were covered with various textures and patterns and colors. Toys, dolls, puzzles, teddy bears, kites, tambourines, puppets filled the room.  Jerry didn’t step through the door. He held it and stared.
“Come in or stay out.” A woman sporting a bright blue apron came toward him. “But don’t let anything escape!”  She bent down and grabbed two small multicolored balls just before they bounded out the door.  She straightened. “Welcome to Benedict Toys.”
Jerry gripped his briefcase tighter. “I’m from the Johnson Brothers accounting firm.”  Cautiously, watching for bouncy escapees, Jerry entered the store.
The woman laughed. “Accountant? I suppose Mr. Benedict sent for you.” She held out her hand with a smile. “I’m Amelia, head of doll sales.”
“Jerry.”
“Nice to meet you, Jerry.  I’ll take you to Mr. Benedict.”
Children ran around them, climbing on shelves and bouncing balls.  Jerry walked into the store with wide eyes.  On one wall there were hundreds of balls sitting on long shelves, arranged from biggest to smallest.  A pile of wooden train tracks waited on a large green rug. In one corner a spiral staircase climbed from the floor to the ceiling, wrapping around a bright red twisty slide. 
As they walked, Amelia straightened boxes and deftly sorted toys into their bins.  “So, you’re an accountant? That’s neat.”
“Yes.”
“I bet you don’t get to go to toy stores very often.”
“No. Not often.”
Amelia placed the two bouncy balls in a box and closed the lid. “I can’t think of why Mr. Benedict would call for an accountant.”
“There are many reasons to hire an accountant.”
“I’m sure there are.”
Amelia led Jerry up to a long wooden table near the center of the store. A man wearing green suspenders was bent over a toy on the table.
“Hello, Mr. Benedict,” Amelia said. 
The man looked up.  His eyes were huge behind a pair of round goggles and his hair stuck out in all directions. “Amelia.  What a pleasure. You’ve looking lovely today.”
“Thank you, sir.”
He looked back down at the toy in his hands and snipped at a few loose strings, then pulled the puppet up by a wooden stick.  He made the doll take a few wobbling steps toward Amelia. “She’s all fixed.  Would you take her back to Puppet Town?”
“Of course.”  She took the puppet by the stick and sat it down on her arm. “And Sir, this is Jerry.” Amelia nodded at Jerry before leaving to replace the puppet.
“Jerry,” Mr. Benedict said. “My carousel repair man. So glad you could make it.”
“No, I’m an accountant.”
“Accountant? Really?  Interesting. What are your qualifications?”
“I have my associate’s degree and my bachelor’s degree in accounting; I passed the CPA examination in the top tenth.”
“Then I guess you’ll do. Come right this way.” Mr. Benedict walked toward the back.  A dark red curtain had been strung along the length of the store and when Mr. Benedict pulled on a big golden tassel, it opened to reveal a beautiful carousel.  Many majestic horses hovered mid-air, awaiting riders; two grand carriages sat bolted to the platform.  Mr. Benedict raised a lever then pushed a button. Round light bulbs flicked on as the ride whirred to life and started to spin.  Joyful music filled the air.  The horses were bobbing up and down. Bright colors blurred as the carousel twirled.
“It seems to be working,” Jerry said.
“It turns, yes, but the horses,” Mr. Benedict sighed. “Haven’t been smiling.”
“They’re made of plaster. They can’t change facial expression.”
“When they arrived here they were smiling, Jerry.  I’ve treated them well, not to many rides a day, only the nicest children.  But look at them now.”
Jerry watched the toy maker.  Mr. Benedict was chewing on his fingernails and watching the carousel turn. “I don’t think I can help you,” Jerry said.
Mr. Benedict didn’t turn around. “You have to.  I’ve tried everything I can think of. That’s why I called a professional.”
“I’m an accountant, Mr. Benedict.”
“Surely some accounting skills apply in carousel repair.  Use whatever you have in that suitcase.”
“Briefcase.” Jerry held his brown briefcase up.  “A calculator and a legal pad aren’t going to help.”
“Jerry, I’ve hired you. Perhaps I made a mistake and called accounting instead of carousel repair, but I would like you to try.  Get my horses to smile again.”  Mr. Benedict walked back into the store. He pulled the tassel and the curtain swooped closed in front of him. 

Monday, April 16, 2012

Milk: The Completed Draft

Well, it has taken entirely too long for me to post the end of the story I wrote for my class. You may notice that I changed them both to girls. I just didn't know how to make a co-ed interaction real. These two girls ended up in quite the adventure!  Here it is, enjoy!



The white board at the front of my fourth grade classroom brightly displayed the Special Students of the week. Each Monday the chart was updated with the names of the new line leader, line ender, calendar person (who had to know the days of the week in English and in Español, por favor), and milk people.  Line leaders and enders were the envy of the class, and the calendar person got at least three minutes of his classmates’ attention each morning.  But being a milk person held no glory.  The task of the milk people was to carry the correct number of little milk cartons from a malodorous milk fridge to our classroom for lunch.  It was a thankless job, noticed only by the kid who used to drink all 8 ounces in under 2 seconds, but someone had to do it.
“Ten whites and eight chocolates” I read off the chart on the skinny metal refrigerator door. Megan reached into the chilly space and grabbed the right number of milks, boldly holding her breath and trying not to get her hands covered with leaked milk.  Giggling, I held my nose with one hand and twisted my long brown braid with the other.  I watched my best friend count the milks.  Milk Duty was almost bearable with Megan.  Earlier that year I had to do it with Kelsey Toledo.  The whole week she talked about all her clothes and shoes and earrings and how many movies her older sister took her to see and how many birthday parties she had been invited to.  I don’t have great clothes or shoes or my ears pierced, and I don’t have a big sister and I seriously think I may have been invited to the fewest birthday parties of anyone in the whole fourth grade.
I caught the milks in the plastic milk crate which we carried between us on the way back to our classroom. Megan and I were friends because we didn’t like to do what the other girls liked to do at recess.  Most of our time at lunch was spent on the swings, pretending to be riding horses and solving mysteries. We talked and laughed during the short walk from the milk room to our classroom.  It went the same way on Tuesday and Wednesday.
By the middle of the week we had, of course, turned the job into a game.  The blue carpet on the hallways of our school had this one block of off-color carpet.  Probably some kid puked there and they couldn’t clean it all up so they just put in a piece of new carpet. We pretended that Deerborne Elementary was in a milk crisis and they needed us to save them and the strange carpet patch was the portal to a school where we could get the milk we needed.  Megan and I would hop onto the patch with one foot, close our eyes, say a secret chant, and pretend that we were transported. Of course, in the game we had to do it all in reverse to get back to Deerborne.
“Jenna,” Megan said as we reopened our eyes. “We gotta name this new school.”
I laughed, “Yes! How about Milk Elementary?”  We pushed open the swinging metal doors and I reached for the fridge. “They must have cleaned in here last night, it doesn’t smell so gross.”
“Maybe they take care-a the milk room at Milk Elementary,” Megan replied, making me giggle. We loaded the 18 little milks into our plastic crate and headed back toward our classroom.  As we turned the corner and prepared for our imaginary trip back through the carpet squares, Megan stopped. The discolored patch had disappeared.

“Megan,” I breathed.  “Where is it?”  We looked down the long hallway.  All of the carpet was the same dirty blue.  I glanced over at her. Her long blonde hair was tied up high on her head in a ponytail that day, and her thin legs stuck out of the bottom of her shorts overalls.  Megan took a deep breath.
 “Whoa,” she said, handing me the crate.  She walked slowly up and down the hallway a little bit. “Weird.”
“Really weird,” I said.
“Come on, we gotta get this milk back to our classroom. We can solve this mystery tomorrow.”  We moved down past the rows of backpacks on hooks and colorful posters.  One poster caught my eye.  It said “Welcome to 6th grade! You fit right in!” and various names were written on puzzle pieces.  I didn’t recognize the poster. I didn’t recognize the names.  Megan walked up to the door of our classroom, and looked in the window. “Jen- Jenna,” she gasped and motioned me forward.  Holding the milk crate in front of me, I walked up to the window.  Everything was backwards. Our desks were facing the other wall, the whiteboard had flipped sides, and Mrs. Vandermeer’s desk was turned the wrong way.  Sitting at her desk was a woman with Mrs. Vandermeer’s skinny face and short hair, but she had entirely blue skin.
I dropped the milk crate and began to run.  Megan stumbled a little over the spilt crate and came after me.  “Jenna! Did you see ‘em, did you see ‘em?” she panted as we rounded the corner. 
“Meg, they were blue!”
“I know. Weird, weird, weird,” she replied. “What’s going on?”
“I don’t know.” I felt a little sick. “That patch in the carpet was gone, and then our classroom was wrong, and Megan, the people were blue!”
“Wait. That patch in the carpet. You don’t think we could’ve actually transported, do you?”
I gasped. “That would be crazy. But this doesn’t really seem like Deerborne.” 
“Not really.”  Megan grabbed my hand. “We’ve gotta figure out how to get back.”
“Yes, please.”  We slid, panting, through the metal doors and into the dark milk room.  As Megan searched for a light switch I looked around.  From the light coming from the window in the door, I could just see what looked like a storage room, with the fridge standing close to the doors, and stacks of paper and tubs of blocks on the walls.  Further back I could barely make out some broom handles before the light faded to black.  Megan suddenly spun around and stared at me wide-eyed. She cupped her hand to her ear.  I heard someone mumbling, and getting closer.
“Rotten, no good kid,” a shadowy figure burst through the doors, carrying our dropped milk crate.  Megan and I scampered away from the doors, crouching back into the dark corner.  The woman tossed our milks back into the fridge.  She was wearing a yellow t-shirt tucked into gray sweatpants which were pulled halfway up her ribs.  A whistle hung around her neck.  The bottom half of her body was round as a marble.  A bunch of short, curly gray hair sat on top of her blue-skinned face. 
Next to me, I felt Megan take a sharp breath in.  She was holding her finger below her nose.  After two more short inhales, Megan let out a ginormous sneeze. The fat teacher spun around, glaring through the darkness at us. “Who’s there?” she demanded. She crept towards the black corner, sweeping her arms hoping to find us.  Without thinking, I grabbed the first heavy thing I felt, swung it up in the air and brought it down with a clang on the top of her head.  The stranger wobbled and fell forward, flat on her face.
“Jenna,” Megan whispered, in wonder. “What’d you do?”
I dropped the thing in my hands in horror.  “I - I don’t know. I guess I just freaked out!”
Megan looked down at the thing.  “Yeah, you did.  That’s a metal shovel!”
“Oh, my gosh. Megan.” I thought I was going to start crying. “I killed someone! I killed someone!”
“Shhh! Don’t worry. She’s probably just knocked out.” She walked up to the body and put her fingers on her blue neck. “Nope, not dead. Help me tie her up just in case.”  We tucked a jump rope under the teacher’s body and rolled her over and over until her arms were plastered to her sides.  I reached for the nametag on a lanyard around her neck. It read “Mrs. Glump, Physical Education” Megan and I grabbed Mrs. Glump’s feet, drug her into a dark corner, and slid a rack of basketballs between her and the door.
“Come on, Jen. We gotta get out of here!” Megan said, stepping up to the milk fridge.
“But how?” I asked her.
“I don’t know, but it’s gotta have something to do with this fridge.”  She pulled the door open and we looked inside.  Nothing strange.
“Let’s retrace our steps,” I suggested. We went out into the hallway. “How did we even get here?” Before my friend could answer, we heard a noise from behind us.
A long line of blue kids was coming towards us. Megan and I had nowhere to go.  We backed against the wall next to a drinking fountain. I grabbed her hand. The kids walked up to us, smiling.
“Hi there! Welcome to Bromley!” said one of them, a girl with long pony tails. “We’re on our way out to recess. Care to join?” I shook my head. “Alright, suit yourself!  But we do have the most tremendously high, wonderful swings!”
Swings were not my number one most favorite thing; they were probably like number 24 or 25.  But swings were Megan’s number one, top most favorite thing in the world.
“Jenna,” she started. “Maybe if we go outside we’ll find a way back to Deerborne.”
“Oh no,” I stopped her. “We’re not going outside. We don’t know what’s out there! Megan, they look weird, they talk weird, their school is weird, they probably eat weird stuff.”
“But did you hear about their swings?”
“Their swings are probably weird.”
“I’m just going to take a look through the window.” Megan walked over to the big glass windows in the swinging metal doors. Her eyes got big. “Jenn. Look at those swings.”
I had to admit, they were great swings. All metal bars with well-worn seats, very tall and very long. “Megan, they’re awesome, but seriously, we’re not going out there.”
“Jenna, you never know. The answer could be in those swings.”
“Or the air could be poison. Or their playground could be a torture ground. Or they could be tricking us into going outside so they can lock us out forever and we’ll starve.”
“Oh, come on. They all look like they’re having fun.”
I knew it wasn’t worth it to argue with her when swings were at stake.  She ran out the doors and jumped on a swing.  I went out too, but kept my foot in the door just in case someone tried to lock me out.
“Hello!” I turned to see where the voice had come from. A boy walked up to me.  His round face actually had normal colored skin.
“Oh, hi,” I said surprised to see someone who looked normal, like me.
The boy stuck his hand out. “I’m Dean Prescott.” He was dressed in a dirty blue button-up shirt with short sleeves and had big, round glasses.
“Jenna Davis.  You don’t look like the others.”
“Neither do you. You must be new.”
“New? What do you mean, new?”
Dean started telling me about Bromley Elementary.  “Every few months, a new kid shows up from Deerborne.  I don’t know how they get here. They usually freak out for a while, but eventually the Bromley students get them to come to class and out for recess.  Soon, they forget all about Deerborne and start to turn blue.  Once the blue starts, there’s no going back.  They can’t remember where they’re from or who they used to be. I’m the only one who still remembers Deerborne.  I left on Show and Tell day.  My pet hamster is still back at Deerborne, waiting for me to show him off,” Dean sniffed. “I’ve been mostly hiding since I got here, trying not to get taken in.” 
“Wow,” I said. “Shoot.”
“I know,” Dean said. “I’ve tried everything to get back, but nothing has worked. I have one last idea to try.  I think it might work, but I can’t do it alone.”
“Oh, we’ll help!” I told him. “Megan!  Megan!” I shouted, “Come quick!”
My friend jumped off the swing with a spin in the air.  She trotted over, looking confused. “Yes?”
“Meg, this is Dean Prescott. He has an idea about how to get us back to Deerborne.”
Megan brushed her hair behind her ear. “Deerborne?”

Thursday, February 16, 2012

Milk: The Story Continues Even Further!

We loaded 18 little milks into our plastic crate and started back for our classroom.  As we rounded the corner and prepared for our imaginary trip back through the carpet squares, James stopped. The discolored patch had disappeared.

“James,” I breathed.  “Where is it?”  We looked down the long hallway at the continuous grey blue of undisturbed carpet.  I glanced over at him.  His eyes were wide under his floppy blonde hair.  James was the kind of boy I could never have a crush on.  We had been friends for way too long.  And he was kind of gross.  He was nothing like Grant Jensen, the sixth grader who once talked to me at the drinking fountain.  But James was still ok, I guess.

“That’s weird,” James said, handing me the crate and jumping onto the place the patch should have been.  He shuffled his feet back and forth, jumped around. “Come on, let’s get back to our classroom.”  We sped down past the rows of backpacks on hooks and colorful posters.  One poster caught my eye.  It proudly declared “Welcome to 5th grade! You fit right in!” and various names were written on puzzle pieces.  I didn’t recognize the poster. I didn’t recognize the names.  James walked up to the door of our classroom and peered in the window. He gasped and motioned me forward.  Holding the milk crate in front of me, I approached the window.  Everything was backwards. Our desks were facing the opposite wall, the whiteboard had flipped sides, Mrs. Sinclair’s desk was turned the wrong way.  Seated at her desk was a woman with Mrs. Sinclair’s kind face and short hair, but she had entirely blue skin.

Screaming, I dropped the milk crate and began to run.  James snatched up the scattered cartons and came after me.  “Molly! Did you see them, did you see them?” He panted as we rounded the corner. 
“James, they were blue.” 

Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Milk: The Story Continues

The white board at the front of my third grade classroom brightly displayed the Special Students of the week. Each Monday the chart was updated with the names of the new line leader, line ender, calendar person (who had to know the days of the week in English and in Español, por favor), and milk people.  Line leaders and enders were the envy of the class, and the calendar person got at least three minutes of his classmates’ attention each morning.  Being a milk person held no glory.  The task of the milk people was to carry the correct number of little milk cartons from a malodorous milk fridge to our classroom for lunch.  It was a thankless job, noticed only by the kid who used to drink all 8 ounces in under 2 seconds, but someone had to do it.

“Ten whites and eight chocolates” I read off the chart on the skinny metal refrigerator door. Colby reached into the chilly space and grabbed the designated number of milks, doing his best to avoid the wet cartons; a wet carton was a leaky carton.  I caught the milks in a plastic milk crate which we carried between us on the way back to our classroom. We talked a little during the short walk.  It went the same way on Tuesday and Wednesday.

By the middle of the week we had created a little game for ourselves.  Our school’s blue carpeted hallways had one rectangle of miscolored carpet.  It was as though some irreversible stain had been fixed by patching in a piece of the same carpet which lacked the wear of the surrounding floor.  We pretended that Deerborne Elementary was out of milk and that the brighter patch was a portal to an identical school where we could get the milk we needed.  Colby and I paused on the patch, closed our eyes, and were transported.

“Molly,” Colby said as we reopened our eyes and started walking toward the milk room. “What do you think we should name this new school?”

I laughed, “Um, Milk Elementary!”  We pushed open the swinging metal doors and I reached for the fridge. “They must have cleaned in here last night, it doesn’t smell so bad.”

“Maybe they actually take care of their milk room at Milk Elementary!” Colby replied, making me giggle. We loaded 18 little milks into our plastic crate and started back for our classroom.  As we rounded the corner and prepared for our imaginary trip back through the carpet squares, Colby stopped. The discolored patch had disappeared.

Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Introductory Paragraphs: An Assignment for Creative Writing Class

Staying true to myself, I have not really written anything since the last assignment in my last writing class last spring. I am happy to say that I am back in a writing class and producing stories once again. Here are two opening paragraphs that suggest plot situations, which have arisen in small part from my own experience.  That was the assignment, and that is all I have for now. I hope you enjoy!


Hannah feigned confidence as she stepped out of the car.  “Bye, Mom.  I’ll see you tomorrow morning.”  Shrugging her bursting duffle bag over her shoulder, Hannah took a deep breath and approached the doors to the bowling alley.  She knew that a dozen giggling girls were perched inside, lacing up their black and red shoes, and twittering to each other about the horrible crimes against fashion they were committing. 
Getting invited to Katherine’s birthday party was no small thing.  Katherine was easily the most popular girl in 8th grade.  She wore confidence and flirtation like a sundress.  Her stunning red hair paired with her knock-your-socks-off straight white teeth left the boys feeling a good kind of strange and the girls feeling desperately inadequate.  Her ultra-rich car salesman father could afford to rent out an entire bowling alley for a few of Katherine’s closest friends.
Hannah had been astounded and baffled by the invitation.  She knew that Katherine had not invited all the girls in the class and was surprised that she had chosen Hannah as one of The Few.  Hannah smacked her bag filled with mockably unattractive clothes and thought to herself, “Maybe I am finally getting cooler.”  She pushed open the glass doors having never even considered Katherine’s true intention in inviting her.

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The white board at the front of my third grade classroom brightly displayed the Special Students of the week. Each Monday the chart was updated with the names of the new line leader, line ender, calendar person (who had to know the days of the week in English and in Español, por favor), and milk people.  Line leaders and enders were the envy of the class, and the calendar person got at least three minutes of his classmates’ attention each morning.  Being a milk person held no glory.  The task of the milk people was to carry the correct number of little milk cartons from a malodorous milk fridge to our classroom for lunch.  It was a thankless job which took away precious Lunchables time.  There was one week of my third grade experience, however, in which being a milk person held more excitement than I ever could have imagined.

Monday, May 16, 2011

Bye-Bye

Just an idea that has been rolling around in my head for a while. We'll see if it goes anywhere.

I can still remember how that music used to make me smile.

Those days my alarm clock would buzz before the sun was awake. It was an automatic routine, more muscle than mind. I would take a quiet shower, only soap, no shampoo, and shake my hair dry. My belt would still be threaded though my jeans, and some t-shirt on my floor would usually pass the sniff test. I would shrugged on my navy letter jacket and click a mix tape into my Walkman. In one smooth motion, I would hop on my bike, set my headphones over my ears, and ride. If you had seen it, you probably would have been impressed.

That morning, not a soul was out on the streets. I remembered the past summer, when customers would stand waiting for the paper, for more news on the Scandal. My legs worked against the February chill, pumping the pedals round and round on my paper route. It took an hour altogether, longer if Mr. Johnson's son, Ralphie, didn't finish all the folding on time. As I rode, the sun began to paint the sky orangey-pink, but added no warmth. I turned up the volume on my Walkman, letting Springsteen vibrate my brain.

"Any bad news on the doorstep today, son?" My father grinned as I walked into the kitchen. I pointed to the headphones wrapped around my head. Rolling my eyes, I grabbed the Wheaties and a bowl.

Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Joy (Part 3 of 3)

Harold shook his head and retreated to the driver’s seat. Turning out of the parking lot, he imagined Eloise standing at her stove, spatula poised, waiting for her morning peaches. Excuses for the time began forming in Harold’s head. He drove to the closest grocery store and quickly threw two peaches in a paper bag. Three minutes carried him back to his neighborhood. He pulled carefully back into the parking spot, and after a quick glance around, he bounded out of the car.

Harold closed his wooden front door behind him. Eloise had demanded air conditioning a few years ago, and he was paying too much to let it out into the Floridian heat. He reached down to pet Lemon, then walked into the kitchen, peach bag in hand, preparing for a verbal assault.

“And what took you so long?” Eloise glanced over the edge of her coffee cup. She had just finished the first crossword puzzle from the newspaper, and was about the start the second.

Harold settled into a chair at the table. “Oh, traffic was terrible, and uh, the, um, peach shipment for today was late, I had to, to wait for them to get stocked.” At that moment, a siren started ringing, getting louder and louder. Eloise walked to the front window and drew back the shade.

“Look at that commotion,” she pointed across the street where two police cars had parked outside their neighbor’s house. An old woman stood frantically pointing and yelling at the officers. “Seems like something happened to that fancy car of hers.”

Harold took a bite of his peach and let the juice dribble down his chin, “Yes, dear.”